Comments on: Brodsku

By: Angus Grieve-Smith

Angus Grieve-Smith — Thu, 14 Feb 2008 17:31:58 +0000

Hm, it looks like the blogging software won't let me center-align text in the comments. Oh well.

If Brodsky could show
just one person who does that
it would make more sense.

By: Angus Grieve-Smith

Angus Grieve-Smith — Thu, 14 Feb 2008 17:30:34 +0000

Thanks, Josh!

If Brodsky could show just one person who does that it would make more sense.

By: Josh

Josh — Thu, 14 Feb 2008 16:38:53 +0000

Angus, that was great,
but short a syllable in
haiku two, line two.

By: Angus Grieve-Smith

Angus Grieve-Smith — Thu, 14 Feb 2008 12:54:43 +0000

Has anyone seen
these low-income people who
drive to Manhattan?

If Brodsky could show
just one of them to us
it would help us see.

People in Jersey
will be paying eight dollars
for a new tunnel.

By: Larry Littlefield

Larry Littlefield — Thu, 14 Feb 2008 03:00:17 +0000

In Albany, money flows
To power.

Not to merit, or need.

From each according to
Their stupidity.

To each according to
Their Greed.

By: Mark

Mark — Wed, 13 Feb 2008 20:28:21 +0000

Aaron is too modest to say so, but he is a published author of haiku. See Honku: The Zen Antidote to Road Rage at honku.org. Still available as a used book on Amazon!